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Post by Zephon on Jul 13, 2006 20:34:10 GMT -5
Every paragraph you type about working outside, on the farm, or in the sun, you gain 10 energy points. You must write 7 sentences per paragraph. You can write a maximum of six paragraphs.
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Revien
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Post by Revien on Aug 7, 2006 3:26:08 GMT -5
Paragraph one!
1:As the sun beat on the earth a few men were working in a small field.
2:Clink...clink was the only noise heard as a pick axe was driven into the rock.
3:Sweat broke as the man drank the water the old man had given him.
4:You see revien agreed to get some rocks out of the farm for an old man who offerd a good days pay...it better be alot.
5:"If it wasn't for the lack of energy i could destroy these blasted things with my altar." cursed revien under his breath.
6:Clink..clink....clink as more and more rocks crumbled the closer he was to his pay.
7:Revien took another sip of water before digging the axe back into the rocks.
Paragraph two!
1:"it's empty" revien threw the bottle on the ground.
2:"Stupid piece of earth break already" revien shouted as he threw the axe at the closest rock.
3:The rock broke instantly...
4:"I could get used to this." Revien said as he casted a wicked smile.
5:"last rock.....now die." Revien aid as he threw the axe back behind his head and he charged his hand with the smallest amount of energy possible.
6:"blood burst, punch...one!" shouted revien as he ran fist first towards the last rock.
7:When his fist made contact the rock twisted with devitateing blast, the split into more shard than revien cared to count."job over."said revien as he walked away to get his pay.
THAT SHOULD BE TWENTY POINTS RIGHT.
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solo
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Post by solo on Aug 12, 2006 0:27:06 GMT -5
1.Alexander walks onto the field into the hot summer morning.
2.He says; This is going to be long and boring day.
3.There is a large rock sitting in the middle of the field so he decide to use his alter.
4.Piston sho
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solo
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Post by solo on Aug 12, 2006 0:43:52 GMT -5
sorry i have to finish it here.
4.Piston punch was here across the field and then it knockd down a small shed.
5. After a little fun he starts to hoing the ground for a while.
6 He is realizing this is not the work for him.
7. He loads the farm turck says ( This not the place for me see ya later).
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Post by Zephon on Aug 12, 2006 15:29:04 GMT -5
Rovien gains +20 Energy for his alter
Solo gains +10 Energy for his Alter
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Revien
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Post by Revien on Aug 16, 2006 21:56:40 GMT -5
1 The heat shot through the clouds as the rain poured onto the ground.
2 "how did get myself into this mess" Revien said as he threw the shovel in to the ground, and wiped the sweat from his face.
3 well at least im getting paid, he said through gritted teeth as he lifted a large boulder out of the way.
4 "Hmmmm i wonder if he'll notice if i clear it with Knives strike"
5 as the ground broke beneeth his feet, his altar grew stronger.
6 "Knives Strike" he shouted as the farm littleraly broke.
7 That will be all.
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Revien
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Post by Revien on Aug 18, 2006 3:54:09 GMT -5
1:As the sun beat on the earth a few men were working in a small field.
2:Clink...clink was the only noise heard as a pick axe was driven into the rock.
3:Sweat broke as the man drank the water the old man had given him.
4:You see revien agreed to get some rocks out of the farm for an old man who offerd a good days pay...it better be alot.
5:"If it wasn't for the lack of energy i could destroy these blasted things with my altar." cursed revien under his breath.
6:Clink..clink....clink as more and more rocks crumbled the closer he was to his pay.
7:Revien took another sip of water before digging the axe back into the rocks.
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ark01
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Post by ark01 on Oct 20, 2006 12:21:47 GMT -5
1:Marasumai walked onto the farm with a sigh, since he was being forced to work here today >.>".
2:He walked about, looking at all the people helping out with the farm work, then he saw some people trying to lift a huge rock onto a truck.
3: He walked up to the people and asked them "do you need some help to lift this....uhhh....rock?" and as they replied for help he transformed his arm only into adimantium, punched the ground, yelled "adimantium eruption!" and shot a big piece of the metal up from the ground beneath the rock a made it go up and onto the truck.
4: After feeling some what good about helping the 2 guys with the huge rock, he saw a little girl trying to get the chickens into the barn to eat, he disided to help. He walked up to the girl, used his full Alter form (that he can use at the moment) to get his right arm, Dragon wings and his dragon tail made of adimantium. He flew up into the air, and yelled "Adimantium storm!" and shot the adimantium crystles down chasing the chickens with them into the barn but making sure not to hit them.
5: He walked away as the little girl thanked him and he waved his hand in exceptence. As he walked, he looked for any one else who needed help with their job on the farm, and to his luck (which isn't all that good...) he couldn't find any one who looked like the needed help.
(health 1025/energy {now} 1075)
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